Black Metal Lyrics

Dude i lyk grindcore and death but i wanna combine stuff to go with it...i luv death bands lyk enslaved and Death but i also lyk alot of other stuff too...i guess wut IM tryin to say is that i want to try to combine everything i lyk into my music and that u guys can do wutevr the f__k u want eith ur german black metal lyric crap and if thats wut u wanna do then i guess no one's gonna stop u but i just put those crappy sets words on the thread to show the i suck at writing lyrics becuz im not serious about it and im not serious about cuz im currently focusing on making my own style (psychadeli fantasy metal) so, if you are going to try and do a type of music seriously then you have to be focused and have to put a lot of hard work into it...dont just use an online translator to translate a few words about gore and violence and stuff like that and slap it on the internet becuz u kno its just gonna suck...so put some focus and thought onto your songs...maybe then we can all get somewhere with our music ...or at least within ourselves...

O yea and can u guys PLEASE HELP ME! I need to know somethings about a stick guitar (www.stick.com)... I posted a thread in the gear section but nobody is replying SO PLEASE PPL!

Translator?Blood and gore???
I'm going to assume you didnt take a look at my lyrics.

That stick instrument looks like a guitar fretbaord thats simply more responsive to light touch rather than strong vibration.Definitley one of those new age instrument attemps.I think it will be a long time before it becomes a staple in guitar drivin music since there grossly overpriced and look damn ugly.I will continue to tap on my six stringer.Great potential though.Just dont buy stock in the company or anything...well...that might not be such a bad idea!

$$$later$$$ \m/

Oh yeah,about your "psychedelic fantasy metal".
You might want to check out tristania(I might have misspelled).Theres a ton of great metal bands that have fantasy themes to there music,but I havnt seen any with tie-dye shirts with an emphisis on trancing people e.c.t
Neurosis comes close though.

lol i dodnt mean fantasy as in the content of the lyrics i meant as in the sort of mood from the music.....

ahhh...I see(I'm thinking Symphonic/brutal/melodic/epic metal)

If that song the original post is to be about vampries and darkness make it less repetative and more bad ass. Do some more research on vampires and find some niche story about some vampire no one knows about yet and use that as the basis or something. Also think what the message or story of the song might be. ANd tell it through clever words worked out or just be blatant about it. Either way choose your words carefully.

Though I have found the more fun you have with writing the better the lyrics might very well be in the end. It's also good to write some stuff out then come back to it in a week then go over whether or not you like them anymore. Cause you might think hey that sounds bad ass now, and then you read it a week later and it sounds lame as hell.

Just been my experience with lyrics. Though there are plenty of funny death metal bands n such with hilarious lyrics muffled under bad ass music. Especially Emperor.

this is the problem with 'lets make this song sound evil, lets make this song sound happy.

u shouldnt have the preconceptions in mind...when travelling through ur soul to express ur view on a matter thats so important u need to write words and melody [ thats really something strong to me]

making it sound like something makes u narrow minded, and u lose the feel of evrything.. thats why everything is sooo overused, love hate every damn thing becomes a fad and trend and it hurts.

so basically just write pure lyrics, no matter what it eventually sounds like.

Originally posted by concrete chaos
so basically just write pure lyrics, no matter what it eventually sounds like.

Even if it sounds like the crap this guy wrote?

then there wouldnt be any point in trying at all. if ur honest ull know what sucks cus it'll make u hate it first of all.

true, now go one thread down and give me your opinion on my lyrics.