Hi there,
I just checked it out. Nice technique. My only negatives are:
I don't like the tone... sorry it's just a personal matter of taste. The lead has too much delay/echo/reverb going on, for me it detracts from the overall clarity. It also sounds very ear piercing - kind of like Rusty Cooley. Personally I prefer a thick warm tone like Ziras or BAttio, very hard to reproduce though.
As far as the composition goes, I'm more into a thematic approach rather than a theoretical one. You have all of the ingredients there that showcase great guitar playing, I just prefer too have a feeling of where the piece is going. THen again, its a matter of taste, whats works for some doesnt for others. I'd like to to hear more and will check out your other links throughout the site.
That said, its quite original and the talent is obviously there.
Keep up the good work,
S